Friday, February 8, 2008

Nicole

In this paragraph I’m going to tell you about Bud’s survival skills. His survival skills helped him from getting beaten. In order for him to not get beaten Bud had to lie. Bud lied all the time. He probably lied to everybody he talked to. Lying isn’t very good, but that’s what he had to do in order to survive. All of Bud’s survival skills were numbered. His number one survival skill was to lie. Always keeping a weapon might have been a survival skill. Why do I say that? Well, Bud always kept a pocketknife. He kept it open just in case there was an intruder to attack. That’s how he protected himself

1 comment:

Student said...

You did a good job explaining two survival skills that Bud used. To improve this piece of writing you could have added a few more details including perhaps, that he was highly motivated and didn't give up easily.
Mrs. A