Friday, February 8, 2008

Kyle

I’m going to tell you about bud Caldwell’s survival skills. Bud still survives because he lies. Lying is not a good thing but that’s how he survives in life. He lies to everyone including strangers. He lives through moving to home to home. He keeps a pocketknife in his pocket. He needs to protect himself somehow.

2 comments:

Student said...

Hey kyle keep up the good work.

from
L.B.

Student said...

To make your writing better I think that you should write a little more. Also, you could put a little more about Bud's survival skills.

Nicole