Friday, February 8, 2008

Thomas

Bud’s survival skills that are lies and he survives. He lives in a foster home and gets beat up. So bud ran away from them. He puts water on his foster and nothing happens. So he put all the water on him. Bud goes through a hard time and gets stung by bees and runs with a shotgun. He also brakes a window. Bud has a lot of rules. He calls them Rules And Things. One of his rules are When you up your mind to do something, hurry up and do it, if you wait you might talk yourself out of what you wanted in the first place.

1 comment:

Student said...

Your paragraph has some good ideas and details. If you had spent some more time proofreading and correcting spelling errors it would had been a much better piece of writing. You should have a friend whose judgement you trust to help you with the proofreading.
Mrs. A