Friday, February 8, 2008

Jesse H

I am going to tell you about Bud Caldwell’s survival skills. One of his survival skills is that he uses lying to get out of things. Also he sleeps with his pocketknife open. When he was at the foster home he got sent to the shed. He tries to escape twice.

He gets out of there. Next goes in and hides their gun. He lives with other people to stay alive. He goes to the library to look at atlases. He uses rules to tell when something good or bad is about to happen. Bud is going to stay with another stranger. He goes to Grand Rapids

He find’s his dad at a club. He lives with his dad and stays with him. He sleeps in his mom’s old room. After this he finds out that his dad is his grandpa. At the end he gets along with his grandpa. Those are some of his survival skills

2 comments:

Student said...

I think that was really good. You did a really good job. I personally liked it all it sounded good and it was accurate.

Student said...

You have written three paragraphs. That shows good effort. Unfortunately you have added many details that aren't really about survival skills. You don't need to write about the whole story because the paragraph was just about the topic of survival skills.